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While rummaging around to unlock my cognition

I stumbled upon a picture that eclipsed my vision

I couldn’t persevere but to go back in time

And stand there to witness the destiny’s crime

I could see their bewitching countenance

Smiling at me with credence

Some going for a vacation

While some returning to their nation

Some talking to their mother and saying goodbye

While some with their wives promising to be back soon and enjoy a pie

A young lad I see sitting adjacent to the isle

Very excited he seems to go back home after a long while

A little angelic soul crying due to ear pain

Who would know all will wash away with rain

New wings waiting to flap

And dreams umpteen to unwrap

Just a hit by destiny’s black shadow

Darkening their enlightening rainbow

Hues and cries, prayers and forgiveness

Oh God why this mercilessness

To vaporize their souls in the midst of nowhere

Loved ones left behind receiving merely a phone call to hear

Whatever happens has a reason and a lesson

Our days are numbered, there’s an end to every session

A crash, an illness or just in sleep

We will have to go down deep

Cherish your days, your moments

For there never is a second life enrollment

As this wreckage declares

“Hold on until all disappears”

Β© Samreen Asad 2020

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Indeed, thousands of them worldwide, desires and dreams shattered in just that very moment. Thank you so much for always giving in your precious time reading and commenting. You are one of the few people whom I truly wait for to visit. 😊
Hope you are doing well and enjoying your weekendπŸ™‚
Happy sundayπŸ’•

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It is for sure, all your dreams, your plans revolves around them, initially it does appear tiresome, you become angry so often with them but looking at their innocent faces, our heart just Melts. 😊β™₯️

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An excellent poem. How well you have written the feelings of the very moment the wonderful journey is taking such a disastrous turn.

Masha Allah you’re a wonderful poet and there’s lot more coming up I’m sure. In Sha Allah.

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Thank you so much Bushra for your lovely words of appreciation, am overwhelmed β€οΈπŸ€— I just saw this picture and I started writing as I felt all of this in my head.
JazakAllah khair dear for always visiting and reading πŸ˜Šβ€οΈπŸ’•means so much.
Happy sundayπŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—

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SMiles Samreen… One Might Ask What is Your
Wish Most to Accomplish Before You Pass Away

My Reply

to Actually

Inspire Folks to

Breathe For It’s True

Where i live There are so Many

Folks Who Worship Death More than

Life and Even Hope For the End of the

World To Provide Heaven For them

Never Seeing The Paradise

Possible to Experience

Within to Give and

Share So Free

With Wings

in Flow Now

That Lift Us and

Others up Higher Each

Day Yes indeed i Love to

See Folks Wear Wings This way

That Do Take Them And All they Love

Higher to a Next Plane of Existence Here

Within on Earth for You See it is often True

‘That Plane Wreckage’ Is a Darkness Within

Yet to Be Developed As Flicker Flame Torch

Bonfire And Even More Than A Forest Fire

To Give and Spread More in For Giving

Thank Giving Love For All

All The Colors

And

Positive

Energy to Bring

To this Existence And

Carry on too in Other Souls Touched

If We Can And Will develop Opportunities for this

Oh Yeah And True to Inspire Folks to Never Let ‘the

Child’ Die of Wonder And Amazement With Curiosity

To Create New Arts for Not Unlike an Ex-Feral

Cat At Many Years of Age They Still Play

And Retain Their Youthful Vigor

And Spirit over Domesticated

Cats Humans No

Different

My

Friend

Humans

Free Or Not

Loving This Life

And All Love Brings Play to
BreaTHE Each Other Higher WiTH SMiLes..:)

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Indeed that plane wreckage is a darkness, which reminds us of our feeble being, makes us believe of that superpower who is controlling the whole universe, makes us believe that thus darkness will engulf everyone of us someday, sooner or later. But as you said, it should ignite this flicker of positivity that we have still time while thinking all of this, we are alive and can cherish and live life until it is our time to go. 😊
Your comments are always full of light and positivity FredπŸ™‚πŸŒžβœ¨
Thank you so much for always reading and leaving your beautiful thoughts. πŸŒŸπŸ™‚
Have a great week ahead 🌺🌷🌼🌻

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That is so kind of you to say Fred, am truly honored to have wonderful beautiful readers like you. 😊
Thank you so much😊 Smiles as you say always πŸ˜€πŸŒΊπŸŒ»πŸŒ·
Stay safe, take careπŸ™‚

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You Know Samreen
You Are A Kind
Person
What
Makes the
World Revolve

In Colors

Of Humanity

My All

Time

Favorite

Culture And

Religion Of

Basic Human

Decency Love

That’s All i Need

To Know About

You Seeing

How You

Flawlessly

Interact

With Humans

You Come into

Contact Treasure

Of Breath Really

The only

Other Person

i’ve Ever Seen

Do This Online is

Another Muslim

Woman Named

Sohair Never

Having

An Off

Day of

Kindness for

Others Smiles Dear

Friend in My Life

Of 60 Years Interacting

With Likely

A Million

People Working

With The Public

For Decades

This Quality

Is As Rare

As Stars

Aligning

On the

Shortest

Day of the

Year All i Have

For You is Applause

And As Negative

As The Churches

Here talk About

Your Flavor

Of Religion

You DO Reflect

A Way of

Peace And Love

That May Speak

In Books

Yet

Rarely

Breathes This Way

For Real My FRiEnDπŸ™πŸƒ

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You know Fred how sweet, kind, beautiful your heart is πŸ™‚ Its your kindness actually to see and speak the language of kindness and compassion. I don’t have words rather am short of them and couldn’t find a proper one to thank you for your beautiful words. Your words truly have had such a profound impact on my heart, I will never forget them. Smiles dear friend always for what you are, a gem. 😊😊😊
You must be preparing for Christmas nowπŸ™‚
Take care, have a great family time during Christmas πŸ˜ŠπŸŽ„πŸŽ…πŸŒ²

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SMiles Dear Samreen
For me Christmas
Is A Living Tree
We Never Take
Down We Color
With Newer More
Beautiful Lights
Year
β€˜Round
As Now
Becomes the
Eternal Love We
Give And Share Free
Indeed Merry Love to
You And All You
Love For
i See

Humanity

At Best

Married

To Love For All

What A Child Will

See With Open Arms

Of Love to Breathe

Thank You

Dear

FRiEnD

With SMiLes☺️🎁

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What wonderful thoughts Fred, indeed it should be all year round. And how beautiful would it be to breathe love everywhere. 😊
Smiles dear Fred, Happy Christmas eveπŸŽ„πŸŽ„πŸŽ„πŸŒ²πŸŒ²πŸ˜ŠπŸŒ»πŸŒ·

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Smiles Dear Giving Thanks on
This Christmas Eve to
All The Wonderful
Nerds And Geeks
Who Prepared And
Still Continue to
Prepare
Wonderful
Avenues to
Exhale Love All

Over The World

It’s Almost Like

They Are Expecting

Love to Come to Spread

All Around The World All

It Needed Yes Is Pathways

Clear iNDeed My Muslim

FRiEnD Samreen one

Will Self

Fulfill

Prophecies

Surely Many Will

With SMiles Deeper

Stories Seeing Verily

Yes Happy Lovemas

Always now

To

BREaTHE

LiVinG Free

Clearly

In

2020 VisionπŸ˜πŸƒπŸŽ„πŸ’«

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Good write up. Many times in reality it happens..sudden stocking news..it all gives you pain at a time but slowly time space gives you strength again to live the life. This is the destiny. Loved it.

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Indeed, life moves on, after all we all have to face it sooner or later😊 Thank you so much for always being so kind, stay safeβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈπŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—

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Life is so unpredictable Samreen which you prosed so beautifully. While we will never know the reason, it’s not us to question fate. We are visitng for a short while even when days seem long and I am reminded of that when visiting my aging parents. I had a profound experience yesterday.. too long to go into here but maybe I’ll post about it.
I particularly loved these lines. So beautiful and stand alone. So lovely, as we will all disappear in time. Have a beautiful Sunday night! Haven’t heard or seen anything from your uncle lately. Has he been posting?

❀️ xoxoxoxoxo

Cherish your days, your moments

For there never is a second life enrollment

As this wreckage declares

β€œHold on until all disappears”

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It is indeed very much unpredictable, it’s that superpower who is in charge of our lives and we never know when our light will diminish. But since the time we are alive, we should really be thankful for it and live happily πŸ™‚ You are so right, looking at our parents we do realise of our vulnerability. It’s sure is so wonderful to be with them.
❀️ Thank you sooo much as always for reading my work and letting me know my thoughts are resonated. πŸ€—πŸ₯°πŸ€—πŸ’•πŸ’ž
Uncle is all good, he is not posting, actually busy with some other work😊
So much love and hugs alwaysβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈπŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—
Have a lovely dayπŸ₯°

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It sure is Samreen and you described so beautifully. It’s good to do what we can before our light goes out. i am thankful to know you.
Glad you enjoyed my sharing and please give my love to your uncle and family. Glad he is well. So much love to you as well!! β€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈπŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—β€οΈ

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Oh thank you so much again and our thankfulness are mutual Cindy, I sooo adore and respect you❀️❀️❀️ I did so much πŸ₯°
sure will I let him know 😊
I got your love πŸ₯°πŸ’žπŸ’•πŸ’–Much much more back at youπŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—β€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈ

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That’s so sweet of you, you are way moreπŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—β€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈ (mutual admiration clubπŸ˜…)

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UmAnsar, habeebity,…Oh this image is powerful and I totally understand why it inspired this poem, your thoughts, your wise truth. You used phrases and chose words to bring this airplane disaster to life, you sent all back, to live their last minutes and yes, it does not have to be as anything as dramatic as a plane crash, to know, that our lives are finite, Alhamdulillah for everything, and every minute we are still alive. It is ironic that my latest poem also deals with mortality too… You penned this, as always from your deep heart and your poetic gift that is part of you too:):) Chilling and honest!! I love it!❀️❀️❀️

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Oh habeebity, I am so honored and very happy you actually summarized the while of it so well in your own beautiful words as always you do. ❀️ Indeed, alhamdulillah for everything, for every breath we breathe.
JazakAllah khair for all your love habeebity, love you πŸ₯°β€οΈπŸ€—πŸ€—β€οΈπŸ₯°

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Thank you so much Jaishree for always reading and taking your time out to comment, means a lot reallyπŸ€—β€οΈπŸ€—Hope you are well, Have a wonderful week ahead🌺🌻🌷

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Thank you soo much dear for your time and kind words, happy you liked it 😊 And am grateful to you really for thinking of me for the nomination β€οΈπŸ€—β€οΈ
Take care, have a wonderful week ahead πŸ’•

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WOW–THIS IS FANTASTICALLY GOOD!!! May I suggest tightening up your sentence structure a little—I have a similar tendency—of a few too many connective words. Other than that, judging by received comments, you have every right to be proud of this one, with your accompanying illustrations!!!!! BRAVO!!!!! πŸ˜€

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