#poetry
I saw a garden of roses
Exquisitely red, filled with aromatic doses
Earth had adorned a velvet sheet, it appeared
Gazing at their beauty, my worries disappeared
Calmly they stood reflecting their poise
They talked and laughed but no noise
The lights of the sun fell on their beautiful petals
Refracting the light, the dews collected on every sepal
Defying gravity, drops stood still
Low energy they possessed, at their will
They swayed passively in the breeze
conversing actively and none disagrees
I dashed into that garden enchanted
To be one of them and my wishes granted
Hurriedly I ran, fell but again stood up
But the distance never seemed to sum up
The nearer I approached, the farther it went
And no where on the way, I could smell its scent
Tired, I stopped and gasped for air
In front of me, my illusion lay bared
Wanderlust, I was chasing and my dreams sabotaged
Nothing it was, but a MIRAGE.
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60 replies on “MIRAGE”
Good poem. In life it happens sometimes when you want to achieve something and you run and run after that but last you find it was illusory and everything in vain.
But one should tried their best that level….
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Thanks so much for your time. π₯°
Yes, truly we face too many illusions in our life and this poetry of mine surfaces many perspectives, you may take roses as us humans and then it would be a different perspective. π
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Wonderful narrative of human behavior and it’s correlation with mirage in terms of expected outcomes.
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Thank you so muchπ€
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Thanks for reading dearπ€
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Loved reading it !
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Glad.. Much thanks dearπ
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Spectacular poem! Thanks for punching a ticket at the Train; means a whole bunch. Spreading the love. Stay stellar! – “Kraken” Nowak
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Thanks so much for stopping by at my station, reading and reverting. π Means a lot.
Stay safe
Good luck
‘Samreen’
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Amazing….There is no end to human imaginationπ
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Absolutely.. πThanks for your timeβ€οΈ
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Sorry for late reply dear sisπ
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Oh not at all a problem.. Its my pleasure that you are taking your time and reading. Thank you β€οΈ
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This is beautiful! β€οΈ
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Thank you so much for your time and appreciation ππ
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Amazing π
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind appreciation ππ
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So beautiful
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Thanks so much Denise β€οΈ
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It’s beautiful.
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Thank you so much for your time π Means a lot.
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Beautiful poem
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Thank you so muchπ
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My pleasure π
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That’s penned so well..!ππ
Lovely read π
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Thanks so very much for your time. π Means a lot π
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It was a pleasure reading π
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Thanks againπ
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This poem is so beautiful ππ
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Thank you so much Palak for going through it. Means a lotππ
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Wow amazing β£οΈ
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Thanks so very much πβ€οΈ
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Pleasure π β£οΈ π
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Such an adorable poemβ€οΈβ€οΈ
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Thanks so very much Navaparna ππ means a lot β€οΈ
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u r an awesome poetπ
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Aw I am obliged dear. That’s really too kind of you to say that. Immensely thankful to you β€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈ
Stay blessed!
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I am sure, you are a seniorπ
Thank you sir for your blessings… you are really kind and a wonderful person..β€οΈβ€οΈ
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I am madam ππ
My name is Samreen and please call me that. I do not want to be called mam.π€
Thanks so so much for your kind words β€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈ
Are you studying?
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oh hii… Yes I am a high school student! Nice to meet you samreen β€οΈβ€οΈ
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Hii.. Oh then you are much smaller than me girl. π I am much senior than you. I am a mother of an almost 3 yr old toddler.
So you can me Samreen didi if you like to. Otherwise, only Samreen also would be perfectly fine. πβ€οΈ
Nice to meet you too dear Navaparna. πππ€
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I really like your beautiful blog. A pleasure to come stroll on your pages. A great discovery and a very interesting blog. I will come back to visit you. Do not hesitate to visit my universe. See you soon. π
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That is so very kind of you Angelilie for your immense appreciation. This really means a lot. Thank you for making my day. π€
It would be an extreme pleasure for me to keep in touch with you. I am already following your beautiful blog. Surely, will keep on visiting.
See you soon too. β€οΈπ Take care!
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Samreen, this beautiful poem and image certainly succeeded in “leading me down the garden path” and the ending caught me by surprise! β€ All the best! Cheryl
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Thanks so much Cheryl for your comment and am really happy you liked the poem. β€οΈπ Thanks again and a very good day to you π€πΊ
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Wow
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Thank you so much dear β€οΈπ
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Beautiful poem.π
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Thanks so so much dear for reading so much of my posts and commenting, β€οΈ Am really honored and happy too ππ€
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It was worth to read dear.πΊβ€οΈ
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Means a lot dear π€β€οΈπΉ
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Beautiful , very near to human Psychology.
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Thank you so very much for your time and lovely comment, happy you liked it π have a good day π·π»πΊ
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Melancholic and leaves you longing for more. Came here looking for today’s post and found this. Hope you are doing fine.
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Thank you sooo much dear for your visit and wonderful words as always π I did not post anything dear, just not getting time.
Am good dear, hope the same for you as well!! Take care, stay safe!! πππ
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Perhaps I should not have sent that email. But wanted to tell you the truth. Thank you for being so graceful about it and replying back to my comment.. Take care.
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Thank you for being truthful and I appreciate that. π I will keep visiting your blog whenever you write. Stay blessed!!
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